Kissed Ogre and Wept Willow
Willow, breathes cold across pale crypts
--Be, witches consume and become
--The moment; Scars the bruised cheek.
Ice and blue, blacker the eclipse
--Dragons wedding gifts for the bride
--Lithe and silent; Shield reticent
Epitome, grace from evil slips
--Slow skulls crushed by booted heels
--Raise and hold; Blades cast high and bold
Sword thrust, ghostly the ghoul's gore drips
--Nightingale has her soothsayer, too
--Trampled pace; Curse comes dawn's embrace
Breath comes, steel marble skin to strips
--Kissed Ogre and wept Willow
--Swept bare floors; Opened empty doors
Hearts tempted, loves not the wood thrips
--Nymph lust shared with consequence
--Beats the heart; A slow rhyming tart
Tongue fell, between sheeted lips
--The Ogre cries for his child bride
--Willow went far; Came morning star.
6 comments:
still simple and original, how about variating the fonts...it will provide more athmosphere i think
Yeah, I probably could. But i'm lazy and I get confused with fonts. So I just stick to one, LOL.
Thanks D for reading!
Well, I like your stuff but this one was kinda "morbid" to me. I think it's neat though that you can come up with that kind of stuff. You have to be very creative!
A Cowboy's Wife
This one depressed me a bit.
Hey, how are you? :-) Hope life is good this week.
Hey girls! I'm good just haven't had much time this week.
Yes, it is slightly morbid.
Yes, it is depressing.
It's not really a fantasy poem, its more about spousal abuse so if you caught those ideas then I did my job!
: P
Ok, I didn't get it. Duh!went back and read it again. Subtle.. too subtle for me.
Good idea though - working reality into the seeming fantasy.
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